Thursday 10 November 2011

Feedback from Pitch

Feedback from Pitch

We done a class pitch and here is the results we got back.

Rating:
One Star 3 out of 5
Two Stars 2 out of 5

Elements that work:

  • Ideology 
  • Record label
  • Demographics
  • Specific target audience and aim
  • Goes out to a wide audience
Things that need developing
  • Band members
  • Costume
  • Casting 
  • Animatic
  • Need performance 
Things that don't work
  • The video concept 
  • Location 

1 comment:

  1. How are you going to address the feedback you've received here Elliot?

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